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Post by Denno on Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:54 am

This old city rumors of a time of a time of great technology, and long forgotten wisdom.
now nothing but endless ruins of towers covered in vines showing that the place has been abandoned for many years, but a small evil aura still falls upon this place, telling of something is inside that dosent want to get disturbed, however many foolhardy adventures still seek into these ruins hoping to uncover something great, yet no one returned with anything valuable, however there goes rumors that it has a sealed gate deep within where there is no entrance, and no matter how much force is applied the door keeps shut

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Re: The forgotten city

Post by Rikku on Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:37 am

as rose walks into the the forgotten city, she looks couries around like she is looking for somthing
"i hope this is the right place that all the stories was about...
mmh what was the city name again hmm..
the lost city! or was it somthing els... hmmm"
say shRose to herself while she is think about all the storie about this place. the forgotte city! Rose just randomlige wandres around with out know were to go in this big ruin city. but one thing is rose sure about it that every step she takes make her closer to the treashers, from the stories she have hear so much about. after been runing around the forgotten city almost frustred for a hour or two Rose sits down on the floor near a wall or somthing like that, looking really iritade
"its not fair
COME ON!!
were is that stupid treasher !!! were is it hiding!
and i dont even know how it looks like"
say she as she make a face expressing a little like this >_<
"maybe it is a big gold statue or maybe a million gold coins!..
or maybe just a piel of junk......"
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Re: The forgotten city

Post by Denno on Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:55 am

The wind goes trough the empty roads of the city, all there is around this place is the endless roads filled with rubble, and the big towers that seemingly was houses for a long forgotten race, close to where Rose is, a big gates covers the entrance to something that looks like a big building, and as the only one its still intact with no roads to enter it, exept for going through the main gate, but brute force cannot open it, so there must be some other way, however a dark evil aura eminates from the building, and many people think its safe to say that whatever is in there is better left unknown, but it is also the only building unexplored, and could be where the treasure is hidden

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Post by Rikku on Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:51 am

rose keeps sitting on the ground next to a ruin, she looks around but just keeps looking frustred out.
"were could that tresure be hidding?"
say she with a low voice as she speaks to herself, as her eyes fall appon the big building with the gate sealing somthing away.
"there it must be there!!!"
say she as she fast gets back on her legs and run over to the gate and and slowlige begins trys to finde a way to open up the gate sealing somthing away from her eyes
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Re: The forgotten city

Post by Denno on Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:17 am

The gate seems to be protected by a layer of something, it seems to be a layer of magic of some kind, a hand can be placed upon it, but it wont move from a persons touch, however after Rose had looked over it for a while, there was a place she touched where the shield suddenly made a smaller explosion, that didnt hurt, but made a little hole in the sheild

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Post by Rikku on Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:15 am

as the shield makes a little explosin rose take fast her hand away, as a reflex
but when she dosent feel that it did hurt her she gently trys to make the hole in the sheild
bigger with tuching the aroundte the edge of the magi barrier.
"it must be inside
why els should there be a sheild?"
say rose happly trying to make a big enought hole for her to get inside and open up the gate
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Post by Denno on Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:11 am

The shield slowly dissolve as Rose touch it, it is slowly growing back together when not touched, but after a while the shield is leaving a big enough hole to step trough, and push the gate open before it closes again

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Post by Rikku on Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:07 am

Rose fast opens up the gate with a quick hand and then almost jumps into the room to get trought the gate before the sheild and the gate before it closes
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Re: The forgotten city

Post by Denno on Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:31 am

As rose steps into the big room, there is no light, everything is bathed in darkness, and only a little light from where rose entered there is still some light, but it barely reaches into the room, however from where rose stand just close to her there are a stone alter, there is dry blood on it, aswell as an ceremonial dagger, that still havent rusted, but is in as fine condition as the day it was used seemingly many decades ago,in this great hall, two red lights is shinning a good bit away from there, the light are however no bigger then an eye pupil

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Post by Rikku on Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:13 am

rose slowlige looks around the room, as she see the two red lights, her heart begins to run wild think about what it could be. rose slowlige begins to move over to the stone alter were the ceremonial dagger is laying, but she keeps a close eye on the two red lights hoping that it is really nothing
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Post by Denno on Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:24 am

just as Rose stands infront of the alter at once torches all over the great hall lights up, and makes all the darkness leave the hall, all around the hall theres filled with things that look like stone blocks, but by expecting it closer it can be seen it is all stone coffins, meant to be used for the old people that used to live there, their impotant leaders, and prophets was burried here, and by one of the coffins a young boy can be seen sitting by a coffin, and he is sitting with his head burried in his arms thats crossed over his knees, as he is rolled up together, and it is impossible to tell if he is alive or not

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Post by Rikku on Mon Jan 25, 2010 2:23 pm

"hello? "
say Rose as looks around her as the room suddenly lightens op
as rose then looks around she see the stone coffins and gets a
big smile on her lips as she see them
"MI RICH, never gone steal from a idiot again, because this must be the thresher"
Rose eyes then suddenly falls appon the boy sitting at one of the stone
coffins making a cold feeling run down over her spine
"hello a you okay? a you death?"
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Post by Denno on Mon Jan 25, 2010 2:38 pm

The boy dose not respond at the moment, he just stays rolled up together, but a cold wind can be felt coming in from the door where rose enter, making it possible to feel that there was somewhere else that the wind would go out, and if you looked on the big walls there could be seen magnificent drawings on the wall showing the history of the city, and their lore and legends in pictures

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Post by Rikku on Mon Jan 25, 2010 2:44 pm

"hello? answer me"
say Rose as she looks a little iritede to the boy and then away from him
"well okay if you dont want to talk, im just gone ignore such a dum brat"
rose the looks op on the walls a little looking at the drawings and the history about the city, how their lore and legendes was
*well that is special, anyway he looks death? but then again it could be a trap or maybe his is sitting by a big treasher!?*
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Post by Denno on Mon Jan 25, 2010 2:56 pm

The boy moves a little bit, indicating that he isent dead yet, but he dosent seem to have much energy left in him, and his red eyes slowly could be seen glowing up in his rolled up position

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Post by Rikku on Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:02 pm

" are you okay, do you want help?"
say Rose as she see that he moves a little fast sprints over to her as she
want to see if his is hurt or what is wrong with him not really noticing that his eyes is glowing red or she dont want to notice . as rose comes over to him she gently lay a hand on his shoulder
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Post by Denno on Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:12 pm

"who... who"
the boys voice was low and unclear, and he got his head slowly lifted from his knees, and so the necklace he was wearing got visible, aswell as his red glowing eyes could be seen clearly, and by his looks he would look like no more then a young 16 year boy

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Post by Rikku on Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:19 pm

"im your friend for now.. so take it slowlige, so
what have happende to you? a you okay? do you need somthing?"

say Rose as she gently take her hand op to his forhead to feel if he is sick
*who is he or what a he?*
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Post by Denno on Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:52 pm

"how did you..."
in the time of a blink the boy stands up and holds Rose up by her throat into the air
"how did you enter this sanctum, its supposed to be off limits"
shortly after his sight got blurred, and he fell to the ground on all four, barely able to stand up, and choughed a bit from his awakening of his long slumber

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Post by Rikku on Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:58 pm

"pleas let go..."
say Rose as she feel how she gets lifte op into the air by her throat as she
cant breath.. and as he lets go of her again she falls down on the ground a gasp for the air as he was strangling her...
"well that was not were nice against some one that wants to help you...
but if you want to know it i got trought the big door?... and a you okay
you look like your sick or somthing"
rose looks a little at him

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Post by Denno on Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:43 pm

"it cant be am i allready that weak"
The boy gasped for air as his body was worn down from his years of not getting any new energy yo his body
"I... I must have a new source"
The boy looks up at Rose desperatly
"please give me your..."
The boy coughs a little more
"please give me your life source, in exchange i will do anything for you"
the boy takes out a piece of paper where there is written that the owner is allowed to command Arion, and there was also a ring going with it that would allow the owner to enforce it, so he wouldnt go around the contract

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Post by Rikku on Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:18 am

"well what do you mean by that? am i just gone give my life to you?
would you really give me anything???..."

Rose takes op the paper and looks a little at and then looks back to him
with a little smile on her lips knowing that she cant read she just did it to look like if she was know what she was doing..
"emh well i have look trought it and it looks fine
so were do i sign?"
rose smiles just not knowing what she is really going into just thinking about
what she would get out of it
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Post by Denno on Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:27 am

Even a person that couldnt read would be ablr to understand the words to their fullest, so even the biggest idiot would understand what kind of deal they where making, as it was the rules of contracts the one signing it knew what they where going into
"take... take the ring, and sign your name with blood at the button line"

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Post by Rikku on Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:37 am

"What with my blood??
cant it be ink or somthing els just not my blood"

Say Rose as she takes a grip in the boy and shakes him a little trying
to get another way to sign the contract, as Rose dosnet really read the contract right now she more just wants to look at it after she have signt it
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Post by Denno on Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:26 am

"if you dont do it in blood then it wont work, its one of the two conditions you have to fur fill"
The boy seemed to get weaker for every moment that passes

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